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Issue1IllustrationSketch2 by ~inneryoung:iconinneryoung:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Fantasy

©2009 ~inneryoung
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Critique wanted :D

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~WICKED-ZOEYGIRL Nov 4, 2009, 5:39:14 PM
His cloak/axe situation confuses me. Is there a hole in the cloak? He'd get rain down his back :(

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~inneryoung Nov 4, 2009, 6:26:34 PM
yes there is a hole in the cloak. It doesn't really bother him cause he can't get wet as part of his fire powers.

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*Bug-Off Nov 4, 2009, 8:12:42 PM
Yeah, I do have to agree with Zoey here. The ax thing seems a little off. You say that there's a hole in his cloak and that the ax and the strap supporting it are being fed through? Seems odd, but it does explain how he's able to wear both the cloak and the ax on his back at the same time. But I think the one thing that kind of strikes me is that it seems kinda small.

Other than that, I think the scene looks great. I love the textures on the trees.
What's he doing? Talking to them?

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~UnknownX Nov 4, 2009, 10:31:22 PM
Is he suppose to be talking to the tree or to himself?
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~UnknownX Nov 5, 2009, 3:32:12 PM
In that case I think it reads well if I came to that conclusion myself. A good composition should be able to tell the viewer right away what is going on in the scene. So, it looks like that worked out well.
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~inneryoung Nov 5, 2009, 3:44:54 PM
yes, I am pleased that people are interpreting the scene correctly :D One of the reasons I post stuff on this site

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~Sukeile 2 days 22 hours ago
Wow! This is stunning! No critique!
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