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These are what I've been working on lately. I have all my pages for the first issue laid out, now it's just a matter of making all the edits and finishing up these splash pages.

But first, please give me some critique on them. Someone told me her head looks too big here, would you agree?

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:iconwicked-zoeygirl:
Nah, I think her head looks fine.

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Writing is as simple, and as complicated, as telling the truth as you see it.
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Great point-of-view!
Great angles!

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It's 106 miles to Chicago, we got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses.

Hit it.
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I wouldn't say that the head is too big, just that it is a bit lop sided. That might be because of the facial features are looking straight on instead of leaning more towards the right. Basically the opposition of the position of the head compared to the orientation of the facial features. Hope this makes sense...
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I wish I could do shadows like you! :heart:
I am not good at critique, and honestly I would not have noticed anything unless you wrote it in the comments :XD:
But what UnknownX said made sense to me.

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